scaramouche: Beyonce wearing a suit and tie (beyonce in suit)
Annie D ([personal profile] scaramouche) wrote in [community profile] writerstorm 2011-01-03 01:57 am (UTC)

I for one like the second scenario.

The first one is more about delaying the characters' happiness, the thought being if they're patient enough and things beyond their power work out, they'll get their end-game. But in the second one, they've got their end-game happiness and have had it taken away (even if only temporarily).

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